Week 11 Blog post
So today I’m talking about 2 of my priorities. In these two
priorities you write about the foods that you like and in a
different one you write about foods that you hate which I
really liked doing. The first one that I did was the good menu
which was probably the more fun one, the only thing that was
annoying is that when I was thinking of foods that I like it
made me sort of hungry.
didn’t like which I found sort of fun but still liked the other
one. Anyway here are the things that were in my good one
Pasta, pizza and butter chicken . These were probably some
of my favorite priorities.
Nice, Tay i think that this is a great blog post. also i think that you should add a few more full stops and commas. it would be nice if you made it a bit tidier too.
ReplyDeleteHi tay It's Nathan. I like how you used good punctuation and made your writing really easy to read What did you do in addition to your favorite foods. I also think it needs more info. Sorry this is so quick I am in a rush.
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